You are doing so wrong with that feed!

If that hook GOTCHU....welllllll

Okay Imma be honest, I happened to stumble upon your website, (the products are so good btw) but the socials? SORRY DARLING BUT ....MEH!!!

Here's a few things to start off with -

1. The feed is just not vibin'
2. The bio can be done so much better...you are into retail, ofc you know that if your door and welcome sign doesn't look good, nobody's gonna step in your shop to have a look at your products. Your bio is that welcome sign and your posts...are the products (well ...literally)
3. Your content is informative, but after a few seconds, it loses the retention aspect. (I can make it fun cuz well...socials are not just about stopping but also STAYING)
4. HOOKS! This is the biggest thing that you are lacking. Once again, content is good but the hooks aren't hooking up bestie! The hooks are too straight forward, (also pardon my striaght forward attitude here but) they don't have the HOOKING UP factor.

I mean we can discuss all of these over a call for sure! Now if you are wondering why should I even get on a call with this person...

Saw you were looking for a social media manager btw?

I am Arya and among 47 other jobs, marketing sits at my core. For one of my clients, I helped generate 10K profit/month and we closed FY23-24 with a 6-fig revenue.

I would love to get on a call with you to discuss how we can take your brand to the next level.

Oh btw, even if we don't work together (cuz neither of us wants to waste our time and energy), I promise you'll still walk off with TONS of knowledge from the discovery call itself. So it's a win-win situation.

Here' the link to book your call -

https://topmate.io/arya_kapoor/950837

I'll see you soon 😃